Heirot

((This is a story I wrote for NaNo WriMo, or National Novel Writing Month. It hasn't been formally edited yet but I wanted to share it anyway. If anyone wishes to help edit/revise you are welcome to PM me and help. It's about a Young Female Vampire, Akana, who finds a Male demon of about the same age, and that they fall in love, against all odds))

It was dark, darker than dark. It was black. The night started like no other and ended like no other.
A high pitch scream filled the air as the first Vampires fell into the village. The humans ran about in confusing patterns, some towards the Dark figures, most away.
"Damn" A vampire male breathed,dropping human he had just drained "I'm still parched". His red eyes scanned the area and he spotted another human. Eagerly he ran at the human. Fangs bared, he felt the human's fear as he fell upon him, with a quick bite he weakened and drained the human. A quick movement to his right caught his attention and he growled.
"This is my kill!" he snarled as the other vampire walked forward.
"I don't want your kill, Valentine" the female cooed "I want a favor to ask of you"
"what is it?" Valentine said smacking his lips, tasting the sweet blood that coated them.
"I want you to change her" she replied revealing an infant girl trying to nurse from the vampire.
"why?" Valentine asked he never saved humans, they were only food, and to save one was to refuse food, which was needed to keep the vampires strong, strong to fight the other races.
"she's the last" the female said, the infant snuggled closer to her an whined this 'mother' held no milk.
"If I save her" Valentine whispered "would you take care of her?"
"Oh, Yes!" the female cried "you know I've wanted a child" she held the infant tighter.
"okay" Valentine sighed he got up from his now cold dinner and walked up to the female.

"Akana!" An angry voice yelled, yet Akana didn't stir, "AKANA!" there was an angry pounding on her locked door. the racket got worse until Akana opened an icy silver eye and yawned showing elongated canines.
"Give me a moment" Akana mumbled, still under sleep's warm embrace, she sat up and quietly unlocked the door. She opened it, there stood in all his finery Valentine, his aged silver hair ruffled, his red eyes held annoyance.
"It took me FIVE hours to wake you!" He bellowed, causing Akana to jump.
"Sorry, Valentine-Sama" Akana said bowing, she felt as if Valentine if Valentine may attack her, but she chased that thought out of her head.
"I needed to hunt hours ago, but NO!" Valentine's usually sweet sounding Romanian accent was harsh and cut Akana's mind badly.
"well the night's still young" Akana smiled "we can still hunt"
"yes, let's" Valentine murmured, as he turned and left. Akana followed and frowned, she needed to hunt just as bad as Grouchy Old Valentine. It was only right she tried to fix what she made wrong.